Thursday, August 24, 2006

My oldest poem..

tumi chokh tule takiechile
pratham aaguner opar hote,
bohukaal aager eek akasher tolay,
dekhechile, pratham amake........
amar pratham manabi sarir...
tarpor, futie tulechile pathure deyale...
chaya chaya eek, manush meye ke
aar futiechile....prathambar...ajana akankha.......
pray nirbodh moner eek... nirjan prante//

tarpor kono eek khorosrotar tire....
beej bunchile tumi...
chokh tule takiechile........
prathambarer ekrash sonali dhaner pechon theke,
dekhechile amay,
saddasnata ami,prathamdiner matir kalashe.....
jaal tulchilam
aar holona tomar beej bona....
naram urbar mati ,
ektal tule nie,
shrishti korechile......
ashpashta amar akriti
aar shrishti korechile jhar....
jaa sedin seei nadir opor boechilo

bideshe apahritaek kritadashi.............
ami sura patra haate...
eshe dariechi ek notun raajdarbare
tumi takiechile
prathamkaaler akshare lekha,
ek rol papyrus er opor die...............
rajprashasti lekhar kotha,
bhule likhe felle...
ek sundarir bhalobasar .......
pratham kabbya kahini
aar lekha hoe gelo ....
sura bahikar mone ....
eek asambhaber nesha.........

ashtra garar pathare
manush meye enkechile
jate beej bunte hobe
manabi murti gorechile
raajprashati lekha bhule
kabbya kahini likhechile

aajke philosophy lecturer sesh benche boshe...
noter khatay amar sketch koro...
hoyto kobitao lekho
sei chokh tule dekho amay...
kather bencher opash theke...
pratham aaguner pare
korechile jor kore adhikar
srotoshwinir tire jharer rater ....
pratham abhishar
bideshinir moner kheya
payni kono paar.
tobe aajke keno samne eshe bolte paro na.....

"tomay chini.....
tumi amar..
anek diner chena..."

18/july/200? (2? 1?) (kolkata)
( has been revised every time it has been read:P)

This is the oldest writing I consider Poetry.. I was barely 15 when I wrote this.. the ones older than this were just games in rhythm.. and simple songs.. I chucked rhyme for the 1st time with this one.. I can still rhyme well.. But I don’t do it if it doesn’t come naturally to the poem..

And I wrote it for Irrfan.. and he never came.. I'm gald..

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